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Good Job!
Only few things I'll point out that would help give things more depth.
-Add some rim lighting.
-The buckle and the pouches on the utility belt, I think the buckle is fine but the pouches look to much like the buckle, they need to look like a different material then the buckle will pop.
I really appreciate it!
I kinda kick myself for not really thinking of utilizing rim lighting. Honestly i dont really do that sort of thing a lot and when done well it can really add a lot of depth
I was kinda disappointed at how i let the drill/hand get kind of lost. in the picture. That should have been a pretty good focal point to the image i was just kinda lost at what to do. maybe something like some rim lighting or what not would've helped to push it to the foregound a bit more
And the utility belt is just a huge oversight on my part. lol. i dunno what i was thinking. I should've made it a point to differentiate the materials but i ended up rendering it all the same :\
Again, I appreciate you taking the time to look!!
And especially for having this line art available to practice with!